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  • Birthday 01/01/1989

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  1. NAME: Brianna GENRE: Christian fantasy AGE: MG/YA PROJECTS: I have several projects. A few novellas and a novel-in-progress. Two of the novellas are about people who get trapped in different worlds and/or time periods and have to figure out why they’re there and how to get back. There’s Old West Dream where a girl takes a train ride back in time, A Friendly Kidnapping where two girls are kidnapped for their own good and one is a kind of moral parable on bitterness (which also occurs in another world) called The Bitterroot. My novel-in-progress, while I made up the places, is not fantasy but more historically themed and a more adult story. It’s about a young woman who is very curious and kind, but with a fiery temper who meets the local hermit and subject of gossip. They become friends and together figure out a dark scheme that he is somehow connected to. WHAT I’M LOOKING FOR IN CP: I would like someone who can point out plot holes or blurry areas, tell me what they think of my characters, as well as the basic stuff. I like constructive criticism, not too soft on me, but also encouraging. It would be ideal if it were someone with a basic Christian point of view as well. Although I have written just fantasy too. PS- I read only manuscripts that have little to no foul language or sex references. Also no horror or dark themes. ABOUT ME: Even though I am 29 I am still a child at heart and find it difficult to write on adult themes. My favorite books are Christy by: Catherine Marshall and Beauty by: Robin McKinley. Also Jane Eyre...Pride and Prejudice...Shadow of the Mountain...I like a lot. (Fun facts) My hobbies are crochet and watercolor and diy projects and hanging with my service dog.
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    As You Are

    Great message! It is easy to read and flows nicely.
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    As You Are

    Great message! It is easy to read and flows nicely.
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    You’Re Too Busy Loving Me

    I love the honesty and heart of this.
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    Love Saves Lives (2018 March Of Dimes Theme)

    I like this, Bob.
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    Blind Bartimeus

    This made me smile. I love the way you turned it into a story blind Bartimeus.
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    I Was Brought Up In A Cult

    It is encouraging to see the stories of people from cults or simply false doctrines who were freed.
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    Easter Reflection

    I like the part about the coins and reflection. It gives a good picture.
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    A Mountain Top Experience

    This short story made me smile. I loved the viewpoint.
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    A Mountain Top Experience

    This short story made me smile. I loved the viewpoint.
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    The Color Of True Love

    A very compelling beginning. It makes me want to see more!
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    Hollow Victory

    I love the format and message of your work, however I think some of your commas are unnecessary. With a poetry format you usually don't need a comma at the end of a line.
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    Happiness

    Good message. Sometimes things are best communicated simply (short and sweet).
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    The Other World

    This sounds like it has great meaning to you.
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    Found

    An intriguing poem. I enjoyed it, but I think to make it a little easier to follow you might want to put a paragraph between two parts of a sentence. Ex: Lost and among wolves out to get me I am far from where I was Death was out to get me Enemies whom I knew not there was
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